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Writing
Strategies ~ 6+1 Traits of Writing by Ruth Culham
6:35 A.M.
The hen’s house.
We knocked on the door. She answered.
Margie Palatini’s detective-style story is a great example
of sentence fluency - a collection of short, snappy
sentences and longer ones packed full of alliteration,
adjectives, and allusions to charming children’s rhymes!
It’s fast-paced, it’s witty, and it’s entertaining!
Here are a few definitions that will help your students to
better understand the story...
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suspect – a person suspected of a crime
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unlawful – illegal; against the law
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rash (“a rash of recent robberies”) –
many instances in a short time
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snitch – tattletale
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convicted – found guilty
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pilfered, pinched, picked – all synonyms
for “steal”
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sneaky, wily, tricky – all synonyms for
“sneaky” or “sly”
In
addition to the vocabulary, it would be a good idea to
review some children’s rhymes before you begin to read
The Web Files. In the story, you’ll see references to
these characters:
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Little Miss Muffet
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Little Bo Peep
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Little Boy Blue
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The Three Little Kittens Who Lost their
Mittens
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Peter Piper, and
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Little Jack Horner
What
a fun way to revive those old nursery rhymes!
* Teaching the
Traits *
Teaching Sentence Fluency: “The Long and Short of It”
As we follow Ducktectives Web and Bill on their hunt for the
vegetable thief, we notice a very interesting pattern in
Ducktective Web’s sentence structure. Some sentences are
short. Blunt. To the point. While others are longer, with
more adjectives, and more detail. Use this story as an
example of the value of varying sentence structure. When
Ducktective Web’s sentences are short and choppy, we
suddenly pay more attention. We know he means business.
His longer sentences often include dialogue, and we know
he’s gathering information to help catch the thief. What we
see is a change in the rhythm and tempo of the writing, and
it causes us to read more carefully. Your students will
keep their audience on their toes if they can vary the
lengths of the sentences in their own writing.
Do a little research on sentence length with The Web
Files. (This could even be a math graphing activity.)
Take a few pages of the story and tally the number of words
in each sentence. For younger students, you might even
photocopy a page or two and allow them to
underline/highlight each sentence with different color
markers, and then count the number of words in each
sentence. The students will be able to see just how short
the short sentences are, and how long the long ones are!
Then practice writing sentences that are different lengths!
Can you write a sentence with just two words? How about one
with 12 words? Try adding adjectives and adverbs to
lengthen your sentences, or removing them to shorten them.
Teaching Word Choice: Amazing Alliteration
“Alliteration”
is
the repetition of a sound at the beginning of two or more
neighboring words. Like “She sells sea shells…” and “Peter
Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers…”. Throughout The
Web Files, Margie Palatini spices up her sentences with
alliteration, and entertains her audience with phrases like
“tasty tart tomatoes” and “lift a load of luscious leafy
lettuce.” There are no bland sentences here!
Students of any age can help to create sentences that use
alliteration. You could start by picking a letter, and then
brainstorming words that begin with that letter. You could
also create a chart with columns for nouns, verbs,
adjectives, and adverbs. Then start brainstorming, even
looking for words in the dictionary or thesaurus. Once your
chart is sufficiently complete, pull together the words that
begin with the same sound, and create some crafty sentences!
For some inspiration, check out this website. You’ll find a
list of examples of alliteration here!
http://volweb.utk.edu/Schools/bedford/harrisms/1allitera.htm
Teaching Conventions: Quirky Quotation Marks and Exciting
Ellipses
The Web Files is chock full of dialogue, as
Ducktectives Web and Bill interview their witnesses and
suspects. You can use the dialogue as a real-world example
of how to punctuate quotations. You’ll see new paragraphs
begin as new characters speak. You’ll see longer quotations
broken into pieces, like “Can it, Ratzo,” I said. “You’ve
been in nothing but garbage for years.” You can also
discuss the placement of periods and commas within quotation
marks.
There are also several ellipses (…) throughout the
story…pauses in the dialogue that indicate some words have
been left out. These instances are a great way to
demonstrate the use of the ellipsis.
Here’s an idea to have your students write their own
mystery, another parody of The Web Files:
http://writingfix.com/PictureBookPrompts/Web_Files_voice.htm
"Just
the Facts, Ma'am."
Bringing in Joe Friday to solve an original mystery plot
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