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Writing Strategies ~ 6+1
Traits of Writing by Ruth Culham
“The truth is often hard to chew. But if it is sweetened with love,
then it is a little easier to swallow.” Libby Louise learns this
very valuable life lesson in this wonderful story by Patricia C.
McKissack. Ruth Culham praises The Honest-to-Goodness Truth
for simplifying a “complex subject to the core level where it really
works for readers.” Honesty is the topic of this warm and relevant
story, and Libby Louise learns how to be honest without hurting her
friends’ feelings.
Here are a few definitions that will help your students to better
understand the story...
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commence – to start, begin
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quiver – to move with a slight shaking motion
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own up – to take responsibility
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trudge – to walk with much effort
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sashay – to glide
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victim – a person harmed by another
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Teaching Ideas*
In her story, Patricia C. McKissack tackles a “big idea” and breaks
it into a series of smaller pieces, giving the audience a
well-developed topic that is accessible and clear. Teaching our
students to do the same – to support their topic with relevant
examples – will help them to master the trait of Ideas. As we
follow Libby through her day, we cringe each time she tells the
truth, knowing full well that she’s going to make someone else mad!
Ms. McKissack uses each of those situations to further develop
Libby’s character and illustrate her struggle with too much
honesty! Those awkward moments are the real story! And that’s a
lesson for our students – the story is in the details!
Teaching Ideas: “Catch Phrase” ~ Elaborating on the Ideas
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Early in the story, we hear Libby’s mama say, “Speak the truth
and shame the devil.” For the rest of the story, we get to
watch Libby’s commitment to the truth make everyone around her
very upset! But where did that phrase come from, and what does
it mean?
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Go to
www.phrases.org.uk/meanings and look up a few phrases for
your students to use! Then assign each student a saying, and
ask them to write about a few scenarios that would illustrate
the meaning of that phrase.
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For example, you might choose “Heard it through the grapevine.”
Allow your students, or help them, to look up the meaning and
origin of the phrase (in this case, “a
piece of information was obtained via an informal contact”). Then
ask them to use that phrase in a short story that includes two
or three scenarios when a character “obtained information from
an informal contact”. We all know how often that happens in
real life! These stories could get really interesting!
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Here are a few others you might try…
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“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
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“Bad hair day”
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“Barking up the wrong tree”
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“Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.”
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“Between a rock and a hard place”
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“The early bird catches the worm.”
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“Three strikes and you are out.”
Teaching Ideas: “Ask Me a Question” ~ Elaborating on the Ideas,
6+1 Traits, p. 64
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Divide students into groups of three.
2.
Each student tells the group a short story of a memorable event that
happened to him or her. The listeners cannot comment during or
after the story.
3.
Instead, they write on a piece of paper three questions for the
storyteller, and then hand the questions to the storyteller.
4.
That way, the storyteller becomes aware of details he or she might
have left out, which can be included next time the story is told,
either orally or in writing.
Teaching Ideas: “Leave It Out” ~ Elaborating on the Ideas, 6+1
Traits, p. 64
1.
Rewrite a familiar story – a simple story that your students have
read and enjoyed before. Take out some of the juicy details, ones
that are important to the central idea of the story.
2.
Share the story as you rewrote it and ask students what is missing.
3.
Now read the original.
4.
Discuss which version makes more sense, is more interesting, and
why. Help students discover that taking time to elaborate and fill
in the banks for the reader is an important step in making their
ideas clear.
Additional Ideas
Teaching Word Choice: “The Ugly Truth”
1.
“The truth is often hard to chew. But if it is sweetened with love,
then it is a little easier to swallow,” Miz Tusselbury explains to
Libby. This lesson will allow your students to practice
“sweetening” the truth, and selecting words that convey their
message without offending their audience!
2.
Begin by making a chart, divided into two columns. Label the
columns as follows. You may want to create a handout that matches
your chart so that the students can work independently later in the
lesson.
3.
In the left column, list Libby’s “ugly truths”, and on the right,
work with your students to reword those statements so that they are
more appropriate and kindly spoken.
4.
Finally, ask your students to think of several other “ugly truths”
that they have heard or spoken themselves, and then work
independently to rewrite them to be a little sweeter!
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The Ugly Truth |
The Sweet Truth |
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“I like your outfit. It’s real pretty…but you’ve got a hole
in your sock.” |
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“Willie don’t got his geography homework.” |
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“Miz Tusselbury, truly and honestly, your yard looks like
a…a…a jungle.” |
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