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Writing Strategies ~ 6+1
Traits of Writing by Ruth Culham
6:35 A.M.
The hen’s house.
We knocked on the door. She answered.
Margie Palatini’s detective-style story is a great example of
sentence fluency - a collection of short, snappy sentences and
longer ones packed full of alliteration, adjectives, and allusions
to charming children’s rhymes! It’s fast-paced, it’s witty, and
it’s entertaining!
Here are a few definitions that will help your students to better
understand the story...
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suspect – a person suspected of a crime
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unlawful – illegal; against the law
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rash (“a rash of recent robberies”) – many
instances in a short time
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snitch – tattletale
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convicted – found guilty
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pilfered, pinched, picked – all synonyms for
“steal”
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sneaky, wily, tricky – all synonyms for “sneaky”
or “sly”
In addition to the vocabulary, it would be a good idea to review
some children’s rhymes before you begin to read The Web Files.
In the story, you’ll see references to these characters:
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Little Miss Muffet
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Little Bo Peep
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Little Boy Blue
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The Three Little Kittens Who Lost their Mittens
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Peter Piper, and
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Little Jack Horner
What a fun
way to revive those old nursery rhymes!
* Teaching the Traits *
Teaching Sentence Fluency: “The Long and Short of It”
As we follow Ducktectives Web and Bill on their hunt for the
vegetable thief, we notice a very interesting pattern in Ducktective
Web’s sentence structure. Some sentences are short. Blunt. To the
point. While others are longer, with more adjectives, and more
detail. Use this story as an example of the value of varying
sentence structure. When Ducktective Web’s sentences are short and
choppy, we suddenly pay more attention. We know he means business.
His longer sentences often include dialogue, and we know he’s
gathering information to help catch the thief. What we see is a
change in the rhythm and tempo of the writing, and it causes us to
read more carefully. Your students will keep their audience on
their toes if they can vary the lengths of the sentences in their
own writing.
Do a little research on sentence length with The Web Files.
(This could even be a math graphing activity.) Take a few pages of
the story and tally the number of words in each sentence. For
younger students, you might even photocopy a page or two and allow
them to underline/highlight each sentence with different color
markers, and then count the number of words in each sentence. The
students will be able to see just how short the short sentences are,
and how long the long ones are! Then practice writing sentences
that are different lengths! Can you write a sentence with just two
words? How about one with 12 words? Try adding adjectives and
adverbs to lengthen your sentences, or removing them to shorten
them.
Teaching Word Choice: Amazing Alliteration
“Alliteration”
is
the
repetition of a sound at the beginning of two or more neighboring
words. Like “She sells sea shells…” and “Peter Piper picked a peck
of pickled peppers…”. Throughout The Web Files, Margie
Palatini spices up her sentences with alliteration, and entertains
her audience with phrases like “tasty tart tomatoes” and “lift a
load of luscious leafy lettuce.” There are no bland sentences here!
Students
of any age can help to create sentences that use alliteration. You
could start by picking a letter, and then brainstorming words that
begin with that letter. You could also create a chart with columns
for nouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs. Then start
brainstorming, even looking for words in the dictionary or
thesaurus. Once your chart is sufficiently complete, pull together
the words that begin with the same sound, and create some crafty
sentences!
For some
inspiration, check out this website. You’ll find a list of examples
of alliteration here!
http://volweb.utk.edu/Schools/bedford/harrisms/1allitera.htm
Teaching
Conventions: Quirky Quotation Marks and Exciting Ellipses
The Web Files is chock full of dialogue, as Ducktectives
Web and Bill interview their witnesses and suspects. You can use
the dialogue as a real-world example of how to punctuate
quotations. You’ll see new paragraphs begin as new characters
speak. You’ll see longer quotations broken into pieces, like “Can
it, Ratzo,” I said. “You’ve been in nothing but garbage for years.”
You can also discuss the placement of periods and commas within
quotation marks.
There
are also several ellipses (…) throughout the story…pauses in the
dialogue that indicate some words have been left out. These
instances are a great way to demonstrate the use of the ellipsis.
Here’s an idea to have your students write their own mystery,
another parody of The Web Files:
http://writingfix.com/PictureBookPrompts/Web_Files_voice.htm
"Just the
Facts, Ma'am."
Bringing in Joe Friday to solve an original mystery plot
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