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Writing Strategies ~ 6+1
Traits of Writing by Ruth Culham
 
Focus Trait: Sentence
Fluency
Support Trait (Secondary Trait): Word Choice
This book follows the trait of sentence fluency (rhyme and rhythm)
and word choice. The students will also be proofreading when they
revise/edit which integrates the trait of conventions. Before
writing, the students should listen and discuss the writing style of
this book’s author.
DAY 1:
1.
HOOK:
There are many different versions of the song, “It Ain’t Gonna Rain
No More.”(See sample copy in packet). Before reading the book, I
Ain’t Gonna Paint No More, play/sing this song with your
children in your class. Discuss the rhyme scheme in the song. (You
may also want to discuss the word “ain’t” with your children too).
The author, Karen Beaumont has adapted this song in to her book. The
children will see/hear many connections. Here is a great link for
the song, “It Ain’t Gonna Rain No More.”
http://www.musiclegacy.com/Pages/itaintgonnarain.htm
http://www.geocities.com/EnchantedForest/Cottage/3192/Itaintrain.html
(Music to go with the song)
2.
Read aloud/Introduce I Ain’t Gonna Paint No More. Point out
the witty and colorful illustrations that David Caltrow uses in this
book. This story has hilarious rhyming couplets. As you are reading,
stress how the words, the rhyme scheme, the punctuation and the
illustrations let us hear so clearly the
VOICE of the main
character as he goes about doing what his mother doesn’t want him to
do. This would be an EXCELLENT place for the children to make
connections to the story. (See packet for connections graphic
organizer)
Day 2
3.
Reread the book I Ain’t Gonna Paint No More. Put up an
overhead of the resource sheet with the student samples. (See
attachment/sheet in packet). Divide the students up into small
groups and have them discuss
SENTENCE FLUENCY and WORD
CHOICE that they see in the samples on the overhead. Have the
groups make a T-chart graphic organizer on the chart paper with
sentence fluency on one side and words choice on the other. Have
them write their ideas/thoughts on chart paper. (Sentence
Fluency-Do the sentences make sense? Do they rhyme? Do your
sentences start with different words? Do you have some long
sentences and some short sentences?) (Word Choice- Does your writing
have many adjectives? Did you use the same word over and over? )You
may have to go back and review/teach the trait of sentence fluency
and/or word choice BEFORE doing this lesson. (There are
posters in your packet you can use as a reference) Have the students
share their T-Charts in front of the class.
4.
The students will now begin to brainstorm for their own poems that
they are going to create. (Show samples that students made up- See
worksheet in packet) Pass out graphic organizer for brainstorming
rhyming words (in packet).
Day 3- BEGIN WRITING POEM
Student Writer Instructions:
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Today you'll be writing your own
four-line poem that can be sung to the tune "It Ain't Gonna Rain no
more."
SAMPLE:
I did find a squid on the beach on the beach.
I did find a squid on the beach.
I screamed and I yelled and the ocean swelled
When I did find a squid on the beach.
--Jasmine D., age 11
Just like Karen Beaumont in her book I Ain't Gonna Paint No More!,
you will try to use internal rhymes.
The internal rhymes in Jasmine's poem (above) have been written in
bold for you to see easier. Think you can do that too?
Your teacher should have given you a worksheet that helped you come
up with some words that might rhyme in your poem's first and second
lines. Be sure you use that worksheet! It'll really help.
If the students need help coming up with rhyming words, this is an
excellent website to help them! -
www.rhymezone.com
Day 4- Revising with the specific trait language
1.
Pass out the Sentence Fluency Post-its and the Word Choice Post-its.
(In packet)
2.
The students will edit/revise using these checklists ranking from
1-5 using the traits of sentence fluency and word choice.
3.
When the students are ready to publish their poems, they can type
them or write them…whatever you would like!
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4.
We are going to share them with our book buddies!
( We also put a conventions checklist in
your packet as well so the students can check/rank their poems for
correct conventions)
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more!
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